Sora
12-16-2008, 09:15 PM
okay i had to write a poen for my english class that related to some poems by this wonderful auther that her name is not in my mind. and i wanted to know what you thought of them.
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As the tree grows
Am I a fool for waiting here?
When I know you wont come
This feeling I have,
By sitting here, I am called dump
You’d said you’d be here
But the time still passes and the tree still grows
I sit here with a smile on my face
But the time still passes and the tree still grows
Soon that smile starts to fade away
And my heart grew weak
But I still wait
And I check for you
Am I a fool for waiting here?
As the time passes and the tree grows
When I know you wont come
But I still wait by the tree that still grows
~~~~~
[untitled][[kairis pov]]
Two hearts that will never the less be intertwined forever
“I’ll come back to you, … I promise” was the last thing you said to me
All I did was just watch you walk away without a peep
And here I am now waiting by the beach for you to come back to me
A year pasted but I still wait by the beach
Our friends are starting to forget
But you still burn in my heart
However day by day I forget little and little
Months have passed and its summer now
I forgot you name already
Silly me I am waiting for a nameless guy
But I still wait by the beach
Here I am at the two year point
And I am tired of waiting
Tired of waiting for a nameless guy
Here I am now about at the beach to go and look for the name I have lost in the depths of my heart
~~~~
Sits there
She sits there
Just staring
Wont let them near
Not even caring
She sits there
With everything off
They will never be on
Their they sit completely covered in dust
She sits there
Wanting to get near
Wanting to care
But her heart wont let her
She sits there
Mumbling to herself
About how ignorant and immature
She has became over the years
~~~
:monkey_sorry: please be nice.
~~~~~~
As the tree grows
Am I a fool for waiting here?
When I know you wont come
This feeling I have,
By sitting here, I am called dump
You’d said you’d be here
But the time still passes and the tree still grows
I sit here with a smile on my face
But the time still passes and the tree still grows
Soon that smile starts to fade away
And my heart grew weak
But I still wait
And I check for you
Am I a fool for waiting here?
As the time passes and the tree grows
When I know you wont come
But I still wait by the tree that still grows
~~~~~
[untitled][[kairis pov]]
Two hearts that will never the less be intertwined forever
“I’ll come back to you, … I promise” was the last thing you said to me
All I did was just watch you walk away without a peep
And here I am now waiting by the beach for you to come back to me
A year pasted but I still wait by the beach
Our friends are starting to forget
But you still burn in my heart
However day by day I forget little and little
Months have passed and its summer now
I forgot you name already
Silly me I am waiting for a nameless guy
But I still wait by the beach
Here I am at the two year point
And I am tired of waiting
Tired of waiting for a nameless guy
Here I am now about at the beach to go and look for the name I have lost in the depths of my heart
~~~~
Sits there
She sits there
Just staring
Wont let them near
Not even caring
She sits there
With everything off
They will never be on
Their they sit completely covered in dust
She sits there
Wanting to get near
Wanting to care
But her heart wont let her
She sits there
Mumbling to herself
About how ignorant and immature
She has became over the years
~~~
:monkey_sorry: please be nice.