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05-08-2011, 05:08 AM
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All Her Fault

-- - -I never understood what it was. He was just so sweet! I couldn't resist, he was my secret crush. It's not like he loves me! I see how he hits on those girls! But, he never.... Touches me. He says hi, he waves, he can't even remember my name, so why WOULD he like me? Luke is so hot, and I'm so.... Not. Well, this starts at lunch, in Freshman year, in the court-yard.

-- - -"So, Luke, are we going to the movies tonight?" I heard Elizabeth, that awful -----, say. She teased me for liking Luke, and told her friends that she'd tell Luke I like him! Tonight! On their DATE! I hate her stupid guts! She ruined Meena's life by calling her a stupid, hideous, lesbo wanna-be-her in 5th grade, and my best friend since kindergarten 'mysteriously disappeared', the day after she said it!-

-- - -"Oh, yeah. Which movie was it?" He thought for a moment, sweeping his beautiful brown strands from his face, looking away from her and for a moment in my direction, before answering his own question. "Nightmare On Elm. Street, right?" She nodded, looking at me, then sitting in his lap like a -----.

-- - -"Kiss me..." She demanded, looking at me with a smirk. I mouthed '-----', and she must've heard it because she said something to him while pointing in my direction. I saw him look at me, raise and eyebrow, and wink at me, then licking his lips. For that, he received a distant blush, a smile, and a girly giggle.

-- - -This turned the tables on Elizabeth, because she screamed, loud enough to hear that I was most certainly a guy. He shrugged his shoulders, and stood, dropping her on the ground. He walked my way, smiling and looking back at her.

-- - -"What are you doing all alone?" He asked in his deep, yet beautiful accent. He had to be from France or Germany or something. I shivered a bit, the tone of his voice could fill anyone on ecstasy, and by anyone I mean myself. My shiver in sheer pleasure was something I wish he didn't, but did, see. "You alright, sweet-heart?" He sat next to me, running a hand up my back, causing me to moan aloud. "I like that sound... Make it again..."-

-- - -He put his hand in my pants, rubbing the tip of my arousal. "Oh god.... I'm... Stop-- please!" I whined, laying down trying to get away. "Oh, more... I want to hear more!" He moaned, with me following. His friends crowded around us, him placing me on the table like I was a feather, and sitting on top of me.-

-- - -"Go Luke!" One boy said while he took off my pants. I reached down, attempting to pull them up, but two of his friends slammed my arms onto the stable. "Please, don't do this!" I said, trying to ignore the huge cock poking at my entrance. "Luke! Luke, please stop!" I tugged and pulled, and kicked and curled my now-revealed toes.-

-- - -"Oh my god," He moaned as he entered me. "Please--- LUKE!" He looked at me and pulled up my tickle-me-pink ponytail, smirking and asking, "Please what?" I coughed, crying and kicking. "Please get out! This is wrong-- I barely know you!" I coughed more, and felt him assault my bruising walls.-

-- - -"Ah-- ah! Stop! No, no, not there! Anywhere but there!" I cried, slightly moaning as he decided to destroy my prostate, my sweet spot, my bundle of sheer-pleasure nerves. Some of my pre-cum came out, like a tiny stream or river, soon becoming an ocean. "Please! Please--- It hurts!" I cried watching myself release now real cum, not the oily, watery pre.-

-- - -He moaned, feeling me tighten as he thrust deeper, faster, and harder into the hilt. "No--- you're ruining me! You're stretching me! I'm gonna die!" I cried, watching as my come stopped, squirting some more out before fully stopping, rather than a pause. "What a -----, telling me you don't enjoy this! You little liar!"

-- - -"Stop--- no! No! I can't take it! I don't believe this!" I cried, clenching tighter around his arousal, until he finally exploded, a huge portion leaking out and some spraying out like a water-gun. "Stop--- get out, you're done, you're done!" I cried, kicking as he pushed in one more time, my pleas meeting ears that seemed less deaf, this being shown by him pulling out of me, and making me feel so violated.

-- - - I looked up and saw some of his friends staring at me like I was some slut, there for their entertainment. "Did you guys seriously jack off to that? That was nothing. But, I don't think he can walk. Let's go before anyone says anything," He looked at me, and walked over. "I didn't mean that, but I thought you were so cute, a tiny little virgin. I had to take you before anybody else did. Don't tell anybody, alright?"-

-- - -I nodded, and saw him turn around, about to leave. I tugged on his shirt, him following by turning back around. "Why..?" I cried. "I told you I'm--" I continued my sentence. "Why did you get out... My prostate... My body... I feel so wild... I want more..."

-- - -He smirked. "Don't worry, you'll get more. If you promise me." I looked up. Anything to have my crush inside me, ruining my hole. "Promise you'll be mine. Forever. I want you to be my girl-- boyfriend." I opened my woozy eyes wide, blinking twice and blushing. "I... I will, Luke. I love you." He smiled in return. "I love you too, Chase." He hugged me.-

-- - -"How do you know my name?" I asked, touching his back. "I've loved you for a long time." He kissed me, and smiled. "I have too, but even if I didn't you're so popular, everyone knows your name." I smiled, hugging and kissing him one last time, and pulling up my pants.-

-- - -"Oh man... You aren't serious." He whined. "What?" I asked. "We're late for our 5th period!" How can we deal with detention?;;;;


How was it? I disliked it, but still, I think that -it was good enough. And another thing. Sorry, this is kinda short. Dirty, too. Oh well, hope ya' like it!

meguilty
06-04-2011, 01:01 AM
This is pretty good..:)
I have classmates and their names are luke and chase too..I just hope they won't do this..lol :)

The_Happiest_Emo
06-10-2011, 01:12 PM
this was REALLY good.!! i hope you make more.! ;)

Lovable100
06-11-2011, 01:11 PM
Wooooo I definitely LOVE IT !! You should totally keep on writing more of them :D

Yamai
06-12-2011, 07:40 AM
.....please continue....... :blush:

yaoifan4evr339
06-14-2011, 11:49 AM
omg make more!! i really liked that it was soo cute! :P

Marty
06-15-2011, 07:14 AM
I liked it but the ending was kind of pointless, he just got rapped why would he believe anything that Luke said to him. You should have made a second one, where he finally trust's Luke after a long period of time, maybe two years. Luke loves Chase, but Chase makes the first move, and they kiss at school, in front of everyone :D! Just a suggestion, but other than that it was so cute!!!

RinHoshino
06-23-2011, 09:55 AM
Yeah I agree with Marty, continue on making the two trust each other, idk maybe their love deepen or something, yeah
:monkey_inlove: Over all I love this story ^^

nayo
06-30-2011, 05:24 AM
It was very good but i agree with Marthy, you should make it longer.. I mean, how could he forgive him so fast after what he did to him, infront of others too... But i really liked it!! Do write more please!!!:shineyes2:

yokura
11-20-2011, 08:18 AM
Whoa~ i really like this.

i'm looking forward for more. ;D