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Nickname: Agito/Agi
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nya, always tired
Location: PERK's House/ Alabama
Age: 21
Join Date: Aug 2009
Currently Reading: D. Gray-Man, Air Gear, Loveless, The Crimson Spell
Currently Watching: Top of list: Soul Eater, Sonic X, Yugioh 5Ds
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Re: Give me back my Easter bunny! +18
Hm, well, overall, I liked it. It was a bit fast paced for me, but then again, it is a one-shot right? The typing errors were a bit of a pain-as in hard to ignore, but I've been accused of not using spell check, so, who am I to say anything, right? Ha ha. Like I said, I really liked it. There was something about it that was just... really nice. I don't know, maybe it's because I haven't read a sasunaru in a while, ha ha. You've got potential, though, to get really good. Keep at it.
Ah, this is my first review in a long time, so I hope it was constructive and helpful and made you feel good and what not. ![]() ![]() ![]() Level: 20 [?]
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Posts: 68
Points: 3.884
Nickname: Shirou-chan
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Location: Germany
Join Date: Apr 2010
Currently Reading: Bitter Sweet Cafe, Soul Eater
Currently Watching: Durarara,Kuroshitsuji 2
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i like it
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