Give me back my Easter bunny! +18 - Yaoi-Haven Forums 2009

Give me back my Easter bunny! +18 · 08-14-2009, 09:18 PM

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5013574/...y_Easter_bunny

I hope you all enjoy it! ^^

SonadowX · 08-15-2009, 09:37 PM

Hm, well, overall, I liked it. It was a bit fast paced for me, but then again, it is a one-shot right? The typing errors were a bit of a pain-as in hard to ignore, but I've been accused of not using spell check, so, who am I to say anything, right? Ha ha. Like I said, I really liked it. There was something about it that was just... really nice. I don't know, maybe it's because I haven't read a sasunaru in a while, ha ha. You've got potential, though, to get really good. Keep at it.

Ah, this is my first review in a long time, so I hope it was constructive and helpful and made you feel good and what not.

xomgmilkx · 04-10-2010, 08:38 AM

Loved it!

debflash · 04-11-2010, 01:53 PM

YAY i like it

08-15-2009, 09:37 PM	#2 (permalink)
SonadowX Yaoi Lover Posts: 69 Points: 10.037 Nickname: Agito/Agi Status: nya, always tired Location: PERK's House/ Alabama Age: 21 Join Date: Aug 2009 Currently Reading: D. Gray-Man, Air Gear, Loveless, The Crimson Spell Currently Watching: Top of list: Soul Eater, Sonic X, Yugioh 5Ds Mood: View Cards View Gallery	Re: Give me back my Easter bunny! +18 Hm, well, overall, I liked it. It was a bit fast paced for me, but then again, it is a one-shot right? The typing errors were a bit of a pain-as in hard to ignore, but I've been accused of not using spell check, so, who am I to say anything, right? Ha ha. Like I said, I really liked it. There was something about it that was just... really nice. I don't know, maybe it's because I haven't read a sasunaru in a while, ha ha. You've got potential, though, to get really good. Keep at it. Ah, this is my first review in a long time, so I hope it was constructive and helpful and made you feel good and what not. Level: 20 [?] Experience: 27.345 Next Level: 29.658

04-10-2010, 08:38 AM	#3 (permalink)
xomgmilkx Yaoi Lover Posts: 85 Points: 2.859 Nickname: Annie, anoes, barb Status: Taken..<3 Location: Netherlands Join Date: Jan 2010 Currently Reading: Yasashii Kankei Currently Watching: Junjou romantica Mood: View Cards View Gallery	Loved it! Level: 19 [?] Experience: 20.348 Next Level: 22.851

04-11-2010, 01:53 PM	#4 (permalink)
debflash Yaoi Lover Posts: 68 Points: 3.884 Nickname: Shirou-chan Status: <(^@^)> Location: Germany Join Date: Apr 2010 Currently Reading: Bitter Sweet Cafe, Soul Eater Currently Watching: Durarara,Kuroshitsuji 2 Mood: View Cards View Gallery	YAY i like it Life is boring without Yaoi^^ uuhuh i love gaara -> Level: 17 [?] Experience: 10.395 Next Level: 13.278 Last edited by debflash; 04-11-2010 at 01:57 PM.


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