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Last chapter: (Noting that this link is very good to use if you have no idea what's going on because you have not read it, if you miss a chapter, this link is always there for you to check so if you couldn't find 20, go to 21 and the link for 20 will be waiting for you, like a loyal friend~)
The Fall of Eden 21
First chapter: (Originally posted by my wonderful DITS, whom we miss because his introductions were always funnier and more A**hole-ish than mine.)
The Fall of Eden 0&1
Arc1 compendium: (Because the first arc has more sex and smaller amounts of drama that makes you face-desk)
Fall of Eden ARC1 Compendium
I feel I should begin with telling you all thank you for the large amount of views to the previous chapter 111 in a week? I love you guys! And thanks once again to the people who commented Nanami Souma and IMA_mara. So much appreciation to you both! ^-^
Goodness, hold onto your seats for this one (or wave off that comment, because it makes TTRR sound old and dumb, let's just face facts, it's sad and dramatic but I think we can handle it) and prepare for more yaoi drama (the BEST kind of drama B****s!) this might get messy, teary-eyed or you might face-desk like I do, it all depends. (am I the only one that thinks I shouldn't be posting pornography on Mother's day? I know, I'll dedicate it to my mother! That makes it okay!) All of you when you're finished reading this dramatic porn, GO HUG YOUR MOTHER if you still have one because without mothers, you wouldn't be born and without birth, you wouldn't be here to read yaoi! *goes and hugs mother, telling her she dedicated a pornographic story to her*
Now, the disclaimer before I go into how my mother laughed at me like I was a flippin' comedian...
In no way, shape, or form are any of the characters or events based off of any real persons or situations. This is entirely fictional and pertains to no one in particular, or even at all.
**WARNING**
Shota, rape, violence, and other life-like situations, fictional as they may be, are used and occasionally themed within this story.
Reader's discretion is advised.
The Fall of Eden 21
*Mall*
Milton: *Ugh…today has just been crazy!!!…and now I’m stuck with the center of it all….I’m attracted to my best friend…..and his boyfriend is cheating on him….this is just horrid, the sooner I get those piercings the better.* So…uh, what store you plan to go to first, how about this one? *forcefully walks Dolph to store and starts to grab pairs of skinny jeans and throws them in a pile on Dolph’s hands*
Dolph: *some how… I knew this would happen…* Uh… How do you know my size? *blond head tilt* These are cute though… And wow!!! Are those holes in the thighs??? Damn, super cute~! I like ‘em!!!
Milton: Jesus Dolph, you are so gay! *Though I like them too…wait, thigh holes, NOOO!!!! OUT OF MY BRAIN!!!* …maybe something with a little less skin~! *takes pair and searches for more*
Dolph: Hey wait!!! I like those!!!… And I am not gay!!!! I have a date tomorrow!!! *pouts*
Milton: Yeah, okay. *The sooner we go back to gay best friends the better….James is hauling a crucifix up a mount and Hugo is the slave driver…we need you Dolph, so things can go back to normal!!!…I miss that word. T.T* If you aren’t gay then why you want something that shows so much skin, come on Dolph, straight people dress more….hmm….*boring* modest.
Dolph: … Well… M-maybe I’m just a non-conformist then? *Yeah, I like girls and revealing clothes! It works!!! >.<* Wait, is that a purple pair? That’s my favorite color!!!
Milton: …..If you wear those it will make you more like me.
Dolph: I’ve seen straight scene kids wear them!!!
Milton:……That’s because straight scene kids want to be gay.
Dolph: I want to be straight but I like these pants!!! *pout*
Milton: *Maybe if I don’t let him have the things he likes because they are “gay” he’ll return to our side of the cookie jar, the one with sugar cookies, sprinkles, and homemade ice cream and chocolaty soft cookies chalked full of crème filling drizzled with hot fudge and having chocolate chips laced delicately in the crème….I WANT DESSERT!!!* Let’s go get a pretzel right now, then shop again! *pulls Dolph*
Dolph: Wait, I want to pay for this stuff!!!
Milton: *buys three hot, steamy pretzels, one for Dolph…and two for him!* *Nom* *Oh my God….this is so savory….* *With mouth full and eyes as wide watery saucers* I love you pretzels. *Another bite with some slow chew chew goodness!*
Dolph: *noms pretzel cutely* I liked those holey jeans a lot!!! *noms* It’s not fair!!! *noms* I’ve had a hard day and I want sexy pants!!! *noms* I even cried today but noooo! Dolphie doesn’t get his sexy pants. *noms*
Milton: *with mouth full* No, Wou shodn’ whar dose if gir stragaight.* *Swallow* Only girls wear skinny jeans in straight relationships, they don’t look that good on men, in fact….LET’S GET YOU SOME BAGGY SHORTS! :D Chicks are really into the whole gangster look, maybe we should get you a cap with some sneakers, oooh, and- and a jersey too! *Hehe, got him.*
Dolph: *OoO OH HELL NO!!!!!* You know what, let’s just meet in the middle and call me a bisexual… *grimaces*
Milton: *stares with head tilt* But Dolph…you are obviously not a bisexual! Otherwise you would have stayed with James~! You’re straight. *scratches chin* Whaddabout something more….hmmm…..how about a band T and a pair of jeans? You’ll be that average cool guy that chicks dig, and we can get a jacket too, a big black and leathery one that’s really heavy with tons of buttons and metal and stuff! Then you’ll be WAAY above the regular cool guys, and totally dominate the field. Hey! *snaps fingers* You could be a biker! That would completely dominate your awesome field and you’d be a total chick magnet! Let’s get you a bandana and maybe let that scruff grow out…could go with some chest hair too…actually, maybe you shouldn’t shave at all! ^.^
Dolph: Uhh… I don’t think I could do that… *blushes* I don’t get facial hair yet and besides, I guess I’m not a bisexual but… Okay, I just got upset today! It feels like I might as well try to date girls while James solves his own issues… I heard him and Jimmy talking today and Jimmy was saying that James should come out and that I deserved a someone that I could be with openly and I got to thinking about it and well… I’ve never tried dating girls before, I figured I could give it a try?
Milton: *The words James should be hearing…I want to punch that -------!* Well you know… *pat on shoulder and chews another pretzel* James is just an ass anyway, isn’t that what you liked about him? *Hmm Hmm?* Besides, if James isn’t the one, then that doesn’t mean you are straight. *I wish James was dead right now!* That just means you need to try to find someone else. You know, just date, but I think that’s a stupid thing to break up about; I was mad at Jimmy when he wasn’t out, but I wasn’t going to break up with him. I was just upset.
Dolph: Yeah, it was stupid but… Maybe I can apologize and get things back to normal… Should I text him, do you think that would work? *hopeful expression*
Milton: Yeah, you should. Don’t worry. *smiles* I’ll take care of Bridget, I have her in one of my classes so I know her pretty well. Let’s just say I’m kind of a “social butterfly”…well pixie to some. You should call him though, texts are so very impersonal, as for me, I’ll text her. *gets up* And I need to pee…watch my pretzel please~! *runs off with slight pee-pee dance.*
Dolph: *takes a deep breath and dials, waiting for the pick up*
James: *laying in bed with pillow over face and screaming into it* *phone rings* *Looks over and doesn't know whether to pick up or not…and lets it go to voicemail*
Milton: *text to Bridget* [ay girl waz goin on! ^.^]
Dolph: *disappointed look and speaks to voicemail* Hey James… It’s Dolph, look, I just wanted to tell you how sorry I am. I really just want to be happy with you and I don’t care about the small, stupid stuff anymore. I love you… Call me back when you get this ‘kay? *hangs up*
James: …*as soon as it goes through James picks up the phone and calls back, biting his fingers and holding it with great suspense*
Dolph: *answers quickly* H-hello?!
Bridget: [nuttin, wbu?]
James: *some silence and then some crying* I--I-I’m sorry Dolph! *throws himself into pillow while holding the phone to his ear still and muffled speech goes through* Please don’t leave me like this!
Milton: [nutn much, jus hngin with Dol, btw, I ned 2telu summin.]
Dolph: I’m sorry too James! *tries not to lose it* Listen, we can just pretend this didn’t happen, we can start over and I won’t pressure you into coming out and I’ll do whatever you want, please just don’t be mad!!! *rubs eyes, still fighting tears*
Bridget: [kkwut?]
James: Uhm…*sniffles* Yeah….umm….*feels storm of tears coming up* I’ve got something to tell you, but I think it’s a bad time….You’re hanging out with Milton at the mall right?
Milton: [wel,dol iz gay, think u new tho.]
Dolph: Yeah, I am… Well, you can tell me whatever you want later, I’m just so happy we could talk like this! I love you so much James, call you back when I get home.
Bridget:[ya inew but I stil lieK hm.]
James: *nods* I--I love you. B-bye. *hangs up* *I can’t listen to him right now, I feel so terrible* *puts head back in pillow and cries to self*
Milton: [Ino, neway, he gay again] *Gets back out of restroom and heads over to Dolph* Did you guys make up?
Dolph: *hits end* Yeah I think we did! Oh Milton I’m so happy!!! *jumps up and hugs Milton* Thank you for helping me sort out all of that emotional baggage! You’re the best friend a person could ask for!!! *squeezes*
Milton: *blushes a little and a bit shocked and surprised* Hey! Umm, no problem. You know you’re my best bud. And at the wedding my best man…or flower girl :D, whichever. Now, let’s go get some skinny jeans!
Dolph: Yes!!! The purple ones and the holey ones too? Since I’m a total ---~?
Milton: Of course! *I still hate that we are making his ass more…….yeah.* We’ll make a total --- out of you! :3 And then my piercings, yay!
Dolph: Oooo, where you getting pierced?
Milton: *puts finger to lips and smirks* It’s a surprise! C’mon let’s go! *grabs Dolph and pulls him along* WAIT! *stops* MY PRETZEL~! *runs back and gets it and nom nom noms as they walk*
Dolph: By the way, thanks for the pretzel, it helped. *smiles and goes back in store* Hmm, I had these and these and these…*picks up* I could use more tops… What do you think my best colors are?
Milton: *starts piling clothes on Dolph again, not even paying attention*
Dolph: Milton~! I can’t hold all these!!! *>.<*
Milton: Oh, I’m sorry….guess we should try some of them on! *helps Dolph and takes him to dressing room* Oh and Dolph…you’d look stupid as a biker…and everyone looks stupid as unoriginal G’s.
Dolph: Yeah, I know that… Wanna come in with me like girls do? *smiles*
Milton: Duh! I picked them out, I pick how they go on!
Dolph: ‘Kay, come in then~! *closes door, sets pants onto bench and starts stripping, showing off super man undies*
Milton: *total eye bulge and super blush and…well….the city bridge is lifting stopping on-going traffic* Umm…. Okay. *puts clothes in front* Try those ones! *DAMN IT I’M STUPID!!!*
Dolph: Okay~! *tries on purple skinny jeans and turns slowly around* How do they look Milton?
Milton: Umm…very cute! *God…* I like the purple, definitely suits you! *Suit’s A LITTLE TOO WELL!!!*
Dolph: Yay! I’m getting these then~! *takes them off and tries on holey pants* What about these?
Milton: Umm…..*I NEED TO GET OUT OF HERE!!!!!!!!!*
*One nightmarish(ly sexy) dressing room moment later*
Milton: *exits with clothes held very close to a place* Okay, let me return these and you go pay for those, okay, let’s do it! *MMMMM, that was horrible!*
Dolph: ‘Kay~! Thank you~! *goes to pay for clothes* *I love these pants!!!!!! ^-^*
Milton: Kay! *Grr….at least the piercings will get my mind off of things…speaking of which, I better not have a boner when I go in, that would be awkward…*
Dolph: Let’s go to the piercing place! *carries bag, swinging it to and fro* Please tell me where it is???
Milton: *leads into piercing place* Hello! I’m here for my appointment!
Piercing/tattoo dude: Cool! Alright, I’ll get these back doors open. *leads the way* Remember not to tell anyone though; I can’t do piercings without permission by law…this is a deal only for you little dude!
Milton: *Nods and climbs into chair*
Piercing/tattoo dude: Alright, cool! Now, you’ll need to remove your shirt; this will be quick I promise!
Milton: *starts removing shirt*
Dolph: Umm… Where is this going to happen??? *I‘m witnessing a crime?! Awesome!!!*
Milton: You’ll see! *I’m so excited, this is actually happening!* *gets all giddy*
Piercing/tattoo guy: Umm…it may actually be easier to unzip your pants and hang out as well, seeing how that is part of our set procedure. *looks at Dolph* You aren’t nudyphobic are you? I’m giving your pal here several piercings, one being a PA, or Prince Albert…you know what that is right?
Milton: *zipping down pants and letting his dick fall out*
Dolph: *eyes get huge and bulge starts forming in pants* You’re going to pierce his dick? *He has pink and blue pubes!!! That‘s so…Shit, do I have a hard on? BUT HE‘S MY BEST FRIEND!!! O.O Still, that‘s surprisingly sexy!!! I can‘t believe it! GO DOWN BONER!!!!! >.<*
Piercing/tattoo guy: Wow, didn’t think anyone in this town would go as far as to dye their pubes.
Milton: Yeah; I did it myself! *proud and accomplished*
Piercing/tattoo guy: That’s sick as ----, I actually dyed mine green.
Milton: No way!
Piercing/tattoo guy: For sure bro. I’m not going to show them to you, indecent exposure to minors and all, but I do. I figured, favorite color, WHY NOT?
Milton: *looks at Dolph after laughing a little* You see why I come here? Alright, I’m ready.
Piercing/tattoo guy: Alright, now the PA you won’t feel, but the nipples and belly ones, well, they might hurt just a little.
Milton: I’m okay with it!
Piercing/tattoo guy: Awesome let’s begin. So I’m going to need some sizes here. Don’t worry this isn’t for perv reasons. *grabs Milton’s un-erect penis and uses finger to check the tip* Okay…*mumbles about gage and fractional measurements* Alright. Let me go inventory some items and bring back some things for you to compare.
Dolph: Y-you’re really doing this? Wow… You’re kinda my hero right now… *GO THE ---- DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RAWR* Do you think it’ll hurt a lot?
Milton: I might squirm a little, but I’ll be fine. It’s not like I’m getting a tattoo! Just one little needle as compared to rows and rows of pricks penetrating your flesh and inserting small increments of ink! Haven’t you ever seen L.A. Ink?
Piercing/tattoo guy: Alright; it is here. I’ve got these suckers ready for yeah; I figured the metal should be the same kind and touch as the ones in your ears; because you know you aren’t allergic to them and also…there is living proof right in those precious ears. Okay, just get relaxed. *takes needle and begins procedure*
Milton: *Squirms and bites down then releases a petite moan*
Dolph: *watches, wishing he was elsewhere for obvious reasons* *…Is that what he sounds like when he‘s… NO! Don‘t even think about it!!! You love and are loyal to James because he is loyal to you.*
Milton: *last piercing is performed and struggles back a bit of a whimper*
Dolph: *Wow… Aside from the sexy part, which was awkward, that was cool!* You okay Milton?
Milton: *nods* No big deal. Just a little uncomfortable. *Kinda hurt…wasn’t as bad as I expected though.*
Piercing/tattoo guy: Okay; so just chill here for a bit now, we don’t want you toppling over in traffic. Let’s relax for a bit.
Milton: Okay. *Yay! I got my piercings, and they look sexy! I want to do SOOO many naughty things!!!…..AND YOU AREN’T HELPING!*
Dolph: So umm… They look nice on you… *They so do~! I wanna touch them… But I won‘t because I love James and he would be really hurt if I did.*
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Dolph: *dials and waits, flopping onto his bed and kicks shoes off*
James: *tiredly raises his head from his bed and notices the vibrating phone, then it starts to ring and he picks it up hastily* Hi Dolph. *God this is so ------- difficult, I should have just told him…it’s been eating at me all day!*
Dolph: Hi James. *smiles to self* What was it that you wanted to tell me?
James: *gut starts to wrench around in his stomach and he feels torn up inside and takes a quick gulp to help swallow his fears…but it is useless* Umm……I’m not exactly sure the best way to come out about this…
Dolph: *come out???* What is it James? You know you can tell me anything! *expectant smile*
James: *Yeah…sure…anything…* Uh huh, I-I don’t know if I can…*God I feel like I’m going to throw up, my stomach hurts really bad all of a sudden*
Dolph: James, c’mon, we’ve known each other for years, you know you can tell me anything!!!
James: God…I’m not sure that’s helping Dolph. *It feels like he’s rubbing salt into the wound, the one I’ve inflicted to myself…damn it, why’d I have to do that!* I’m really sorry….*tears up and starts crying* I-I’m really sorry!
Dolph: …About today? *head tilt* W-we talked about that already James… *starts to worry*
James: *Sinks into skin* I-I-I really want to say, but I really don’t want to either…I’m scared of it all. I don’t want you leaving me again, I’m such a fool.
Dolph:*what‘s going on???* …Why are you a fool?
James: I really don’t know how to put this…every time I think of saying it I feel like I’m being…choked. *feels a tightening over his neck, the words starting to scrunch up into little guilty fingers wrapping around him and pulling away all his breath, but leaving the emotion, tears formulate and pour over fast with fury* I HAD SEX WITH ANOTHER MAN! *begins sobbing over the phone uncontrollably so*
Dolph: *drops the phone* *…What? N-no, he‘s lying… He has to be…* *picks phone back up but says nothing*
James: G-g-god I’m ju-st s-so sorr-sorry. Please do-don’t le-le-leave me. *holding knuckles up to mouth trying to cover his lips up with shame* I’m such a trai-tor. If y-you don’t want me anymore, just tell….*chokes back on the words* Just tell me now.
Dolph: *voice shaking* I… I think I need some time…*hangs up*
James: *stares in utter suspense at the wall, then falls to his belly and stares at the phone with great loss* I’m so stupid. He doesn’t deserve me.
Dolph: *drops phone again, falls back onto the bed and starts crying into pillows*
James: *grabs a nearby model plane from his dresser and stares at it thoughtfully with tears in his eyes, turns it by the wings span, rotating it in his hands, then angles the yoke of the plane upwards and downwards while thinking of what he had done*
Dolph: *cries hours into the night and finally passes out from exhaustion*
James: *Formulates a diving motion with the plane and gives it a gentle crash into the pillow beside him, as he falls asleep still wondering of the unheard consequences*
After notes
So yeah, all of that happened. Cliffhanger much? I know. And like, no Hugo in this chapter! But that's okay. I'll live. Now, I was discussing a few things with a friend on this site and she reminded me of something that I needed to do, art. Because I tried posting a link to a site before but it didn't get attention so I'll just post the image here because I've been promising! Please forgive me for the quality, it's a picture of the drawing, taken on my phone in my horribly lit bedroom and it was tacked to my wall. But the art is mine, I drew it myself and colored it and everything.
Please forgive the size, also, the shadow you see, that's me! You get to see my creeper shadow~ But from left to right, it's Dolph, James, and Milton. Obviously how they look now, not when they were babies. (little shotas) So yeah, knowing that this is the quality you'll have to deal with to see these characters, you may request character drawings if you don't mind black and white with a colored chibi head next to it. (That's how I've been drawing my stuff because I've been running out of very important colors so I work in pencil for now but if you want, I could always post pictures of characters you want to see. Ask in a reply if you were ever curious about what a character looks like or something because this could be a thing!)
And because I promised, a quote. "This is why they make yaoi communities! For all of us secret pervs to come together and make beautiful pornography for each other! " -TTRR
Posting and writing by DITS and TTRR. Editing done mostly by TTRR, and very little by DITS
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. (Glad you like the drawing by the way, yes, James has stubble~)
