Love Nips [ Kindom Hearts- Zemyx]

[Satoshi]

Yeah.. not too proud of it.. first reveiw on fanfiction.net was crap.. and i already knew my grammar and spelling sucks... ..

sorry.. if its hard to read/makes no sense/crap- because i wrote it for a friend .. about a real -life thing.. .. thas just exagerated.
My POV ( Zexion) .. between someone i liked [Demyx] and someone they were dating.. [ Axel] whom i am curently with now.. and had our 10 month anniversary with two days ago on saturday... yeah.. not that anyone needed to know that.. but i guess i'll post this anyways..

sorry again.. for the negitive tone.. .. too much drama.. lol.. half which isnt even realated to me.. yeah .. once again.. off topic.. sorry...



LOVE NIPS


Thursday 9:23;

Axel's cell phone rang,he didn't answer,he let it go to voice mail,-"Hey,It's me-uhh how are you?Your not returning my calls..what's up with that?-Anyways,call me...love you...bye...".Axel as usual-deleted the message,alog with most of the others.He was just too busy with his emotions to talk with his beloved, a quite tragic matter really...

The next day at around the same time as when Demyx had phoned ,Axel just could't take it anymore..he sent Demyx and E-mail that read : 'I'm walking out of your life-have fun...'He closed his heart..He closed his mind and he closed out Demyx too...

Later..Axel listend to Demyx last message over and over again;"Thanks Axel!!...Thanks for...everything...bye.."

Zexion's POV

Demyx called me late that night- his usually melodic and smooth voice was shaken,full of tears and filled with pain.

My Phone rang,and my heart stopped..."Zex..?"Demyx asked.i answered him with a simple clueless 'Yes?'."Axel...he..he...".Demyx started to cry-"He dumped me Zex!Why!Why did he do this!..." I just sat there..listening to Demyx's shaky breath waiting for an answer from me."H-hello..Zex?" I must have been spaced out because he had pressed a button on the phone to get my attention.'I..i'm very sorry to hear that Dem...any idea what happend?'I said-quite unsure of his emotional state."He started balling again.."No i don't!!" He yelled into the phone.I lightend my tone to comfort him.'Well..you can always come over here and we can talk..maybe?'He seemed to lighten too,as he replied and asked to spend the night-And of course me having a 'certain liking' for a 'certain nobody' agreed.

Demyx's POV

I had asked Zexion if i could spend the night-but even thinking about it..for some reason, made me feel so much better...

I walked to the bus station and took the 106 to Zexion's condo downtown near his workplace.He lived in apartment 689-on the 5th floor.As i walked up to the door i felt i warm feeling..but then again maybe i was just too dumb to realize i was red as a strawberry.Zexion opened the door..and i just stared.I geuss i was kinda embarassed ..ive never slept over at Zex's place before.He laughed and grabed my arm to pull me in tne took my stuff and set it on the couch.Then he turned to me smiled again and pulled me down to sit with him as he turned on the television.

Normal POV

Zexion pulled Demyx to sit with him-but he held his hand long after they had been seated, then blushed and looked at Demyx-who was also blushing.Zexion let go."Want somthing to drink Dem?"He asked clearing his throat and turning towards his kitchen.Demyx nodded."Yes please..Zexi.."And started flipping through channels.Zexion grabbed some Sprite, orange juice and a bottle of Grenadene out of the fridge ..and some marichino cherries too.He filled two wine glasses with the delicious shirly temple ingredients and plopped a cherry in each-and put a little lime slice and an umbrella on each glass."Here you go"He said to Demyx with a smile."Wow..those look goood..you didn't have to do that.."Demyx said taking the glass in awe staring at Zexion's beautyfull works of art.

Demyx soon fell asleep on the couch curled up close to Zexion.Zexion picked him up and slipped him into his bed and went to go change in his night cloths.Zexion slid into bed with his book and 'his' Demyx.

Later in the early morning around 2:45, Zexion woke up to a grumbling Demyx clinging to the pillow and crying."Dem!?" Zexion said sternly-waking Demyx from his nightmare."AHHH!" Demyx screamed-only to find himself in the arms of his close friend."Are you okay Dem??"Zexion asked hastely."Well..i am now..Zexi-"His melodic, seductive voice flowing through Zexion's mind."...thanks to you..."Zexion's body suddenly felt very very hot-so he went out onto his balcony for some air and Demyx followed.What was that about..?Zexion wondered to himself.

He lent on the railing and just looked over at Demyx-observing a fountain in the main square.Zexion walked up behind his and wrapped his arms around Demyx's wait."I geuss we didn't 'talk' very much did we..huh.."He whispered in Demyx's ear."That's okay.."Demyx said..turning to face Zexion and place his arms around his neck,"We can...'talk' later..."

What happened next suprised Zexion more than Demyx.Zexion closed his eyes and lent forward,his lips,slowly coming more and more in-contact with Demyx's.They stayed like that for a while-not moaning nor touching,just staying like that-as if the slightest movement would shatter the moment forever.Zexion felt like his heart was pierced by an angel.He moved slowly letting Demyx follow-not wanting this to end.They made their way back to Zexion's bedroom.They just stayed there for hours,connected with one another."Zexi?"Demyx asked innocently."Yes..what is it my love..." "I just ..i think..i don't know..is this right?" Zexion lifted his lips from Demyx's shoulder and lightly pressed them upon Demyx's forehead."You tell me.."Upon saying that-Demyx looked a little shocked but then launched himslef over top Zexion to get a good angle.Zexion let Demyx pass his lips once more...and they stayed like that..not wanting to shatter the moment.."I love you"..Zexion whispered to Demyx whom he new to be asleep.But-it didn't hurt to say it did it...? Ohh..but it did..for Zexion...

Saturday 10:08 a.m.

Demyx heard his cell ringing from his bag in the livingroom.He answered."Hello..?"Demyx's heart throbed painfully."Hey..it's Axel..where've u been love?"Demyx was shocked."What the hell do you mean 'Where've you been?' You dumped Me!!" "What! No i didn't Dem..i just thought u might need some time away from me being an ass-hole!"Demyx didn't respond for a long while and Axel stayed silent."So..be at my house around 11:30 then?"Axel said to break the tennsion."Sure..." was Demyx's relpy.

Demyx slipped into Zexion's room one last time,for one last look..Did he really want Axel..or did he want Zexion.His mind said Axel but his heart..well i geuss...if he didn't really have one..there's nothing bad in not listening to somthing you know's not there...So Demyx packed up his stuff..And gently stole one last kiss from Zexion's loving lips."Bye Zex..don't worry..once i get a heart..maybe i'll listen to it next time.."Demyx looked at his watch-10:30- and back over at Zexion, he had an hour to get to Axel's place..he dashed out the door..

Zexion sat up slowly,tears spilling down his cheeks.He had heard everything Demyx has said."Well Demyx...i geuss i can just wait..because once you find your heart..i'll porbably just steal it back anyways..."


[ When i re-read this a while ago.. made me almost cry .. and laugh at my corny-ness : )]


Reveiw if you wish here.. http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/liv...7539&chapter=1 sorry if the link doesnt work..

[Satoshi]

K so ..when i mean read.. i ask that people TELL me what they think.. .. well if the 13 veiws means people didnt acually read it.. then uh thanks.. lol .... >> .. ...

... guess i just need to learn to do better on my stupid art.. and my stupid writitng... : ) ~ . i
l post better another time~

[kawaiimuffin]

awww that was such a cute and sad story nao!!!!! it almost make me cried ((memories come to my head)) ......but anywayz....i really like ur fanfic, it was really nice!!!!!!!!!

[Satoshi]

awww that was such a cute and sad story nao!!!!! it almost make me cried ((memories come to my head)) ......but anywayz....i really like ur fanfic, it was really nice!!!!!!!!!

^^ thanks.. haha .. you always pay attention to me T.T -hugs-

[kawaiimuffin]

welcome ^^ awww cuz u ish my friend *hugz back and gives cookie*

[Satoshi]

welcome ^^ awww cuz u ish my friend *hugz back and gives cookie*

^_^ thanks~

[RoxasRAWR]

that was really good Fuji i liked it

[Satoshi]

that was really good Fuji i liked it

Awe thanks~ : ) .. ... i dont.. i think its lame.. but lol xD.. i write for a reason i guess.. to see if people like it.. -3- ~

[AkamaRu10]

really nice!!!
i love it <3

[Satoshi]

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really nice!!!
i love it <3

: ) thanks <3~