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Thread: Traveling Through Demensions
      

  1. #1

    Traveling Through Demensions

    Cool I get to be the first to post. Now here's a little bit of my fanfiction. If ya'll like it them i'll post more.
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    Gaara sat in his room on a bed he didn't need, his kazegage atire set off to the side somewhere. He held a locket he had gotten many years ago. He opened it and looked at the picture inside. He missed her. She was his first friend and the only one he knew cared about him until he met Naruto. He thought back to one of the last times he saw her.

    Flashback

    A six year old Gaara stood alone in the sand. He was suddenly tackled by a girl who's face was covered by her bangs. "I'll miss you panda bear." she said with a small sad smile. "I'll miss you too, Lokina." he said with one of his own sad smiles. "I promise I'll come back one day. Oh, it looks like i've nicked your cheek." It had a small lining of blood. "I promise i'll come back and we'll get married." she said and kissed the blood away. Gaara blushed innocently. then she ran to her mother and looked back once more before disappearing.

    End Flashback

    She finally returned almost a year ago but they could only stay together for 3 weeks. During this time Lokina told him about how her mother was killed by a lover not to long after they left Suna and how somehow she was sent to a different demension. She had been sent to a foster home and was abused. She was also abused at the school she went to. She graduated college by the time she was 10 but went back to middle and highschool to see what it was like. She was and outcast and like Gaara became cold and uncaring until she met a girl named Kiyoshi and evetually 5 other people from broken homes. She had also told him how she got the government to get a house for all of them to live in.She even took him to meet all of her friends. There he discover two things. One, that his life was only an anime and two, she had the weirdest friends in the universe.

    He looked forward to seeing her again.

    He stopped thinking about her and let his mind drift to another blond love interest.

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    I actually have more written but I'll wait until I get some feedback

  2. #2
    I like it a lot! I think you should post more. Good job!



  3. #5
    "SASUKE-KUN!!!!!Yeled Sakura as she glomped him. " Hey Sasuke" said Naruto. Sasuke gave him a 'help me' look, but Naruto only snickered at his unfortunate friend. Ever since they had rescued him from Orochimaru, Sakura had been hugging ans cuddling Sasuke every chance she got. The three were waiting on their always late sensei. They heard a poof and looked to their lefts to se Kakashi standing on a low branch of a tree reading his favored icha icha book. " Sorry I'm late. Little Jimmy got trapt in a well a..." "LIER!" Naruto and Sakura said in unison. Sasuke only snorted. Kakashi only sighed and spoke again. "We won't be training today." "Why not." asked a furious Naruto. "Because Tsunade-sama has a mission for us." "This had better be good."
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    "hey grandma u better have good mission for us." "Just shut up and listen you little twirp. I've recently heard from our intelegence that a very large chakra has been detencted between here and Suna. I want the four of you to investigate, if it is a danger to any of the villiges eliminate it. Just make sure you don't die." " Whatever grandma." "Why you little.." "Let's go!" Naruto shouted and draged his comrads along. He may have be cocky but he's not stupid.
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    "We've been traveling for hours let's stop and eat." whined Naruto. "I agree with him, a small break wouldn't hurt." agreed Sasuke. he knew it would be the only way to get Sakura off him if only for a short time. " Sasuke, you act like you don't want me on you." " That's because I don't." "Oh Sasuke, your such a kidder." she said and giggled. He groaned and lowered his head. " Your all hopeless." Kakashi said shaking his head.
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    Sorry about their shortness, I only have short amounts of time to type this

  4. #6
    awww, so far so good though
    -this stories pretty kewl

  5. #7
    "Not all of us just Sakura." "Your so mean Sasuke." "It's not mean it's being brutally honest." "Come on you know you love her." said Naruto giving Sasuke a playful hit on the back. Sasuke gave him one of the coldest death glares ever. This didn't phase Naruto. "Or maybe you don't want her because you would rather have a man." "What if I do." "..." Sasuke smiled at his victory "You have to ruin my fun." "Always." "Like Sasuke would want a man over the beauty that is me." "Honestly I would want a ma instead of you." "Quit joking around." "I'm not joking and I don't ust want ay man I want my man." Sakura loosend her grip on his arm. 'Yes it's working, I'd rather have her think I'm gay than have her attached to me everyday.' "And who is this man, don't tell me it's Naruto." "It's not. My man is Kakashi." Lucky for Sasuke Kakashi took the hit and decided to play along. Sakura and Naruto gasped. "Is it true sensei." "Yes it is and now that you all know," he held his arms open. "Come here Sasuke" He quickly ran into the arms of his 'lover' "I owe you for this Kakashi, I'll do anything you want." Sasuke whispred to him "Lets see if you can keep your word" Kakashi whispered back. "Well that was unexpected." Narut sai scratching his head. Sakura just stood there and sulked.
    They all paused when they heard someone singing

    Ay, iyaiyai,
    Ay, iyaiyai
    A-a-a iyaiyai,
    Where's my samurai

    I've been searching for a man
    All across Japan
    Just to find, to find my samurai
    Someone who is strong
    But still a little shy
    Yes I need, I need my samurai

    Ay, ay, ay,
    I'm your little butterfly
    Green, black and blue,
    Make the colours in the sky
    Ay, ay, ay, I'm your little butterfly
    Green, black and blue,
    Make the colours in the sky

    I've been searching in the woods
    And high upon the hills
    Just to find, to find my samurai
    Someone who won't regret
    To keep me in his net
    Yes I need, I need my samurai

    Ay, ay, ay,
    I'm your little butterfly
    Green, black and blue,
    Make the colours in the sky
    Ay, ay, ay, I'm your little butterfly
    Green, black and blue,
    Make the colours in the sky

    Ay, iyaiyai,
    Ay, iyaiyai
    A-a-a iyaiyai,
    Where's my samurai

    Ay, iyaiyai,
    Ay, iyaiyai
    A-a-a iyaiyai,
    Where's my samurai

    The sound of the voice was soothing but had a sadness hidden behind it. The voice started to sing again. They followed the voice until they cme to a clearing. it was a girl dressed in a black shirt. a brocken,bleeding heart was on the chest part. On one sleeve was an eye with dark makeup around it the the other had the alien peace sign. her black jeans were tight and had a multitude of chains and belts. Her hair was long and covered one eye. The eye that wasn't covered was a beautiful shade of purple and had darkness around it 'Just like gaara's.' Naruto thought one one wrist she had a wridt band and the other has two black bracletts, she wore a beaded neclace and a collar on her neck.
    "You don't have to hide in the trees, I won't hurt you." They revealed themselves and the mysterious girl looked over all of them. A small smile graced her face. "K-kakashi-kun." She said and looked him dead in the eye. His eye widened when he realized who she was. "Lokina....are you really that same little girl." " Her smile brightened and she ran towards him and gave him a hug. "I didn't think yuo would remember." He patted her head. "How could I forget." Naruto,Sasuke and Sakura just syood there with confused looks on thier faces.

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    Soon this will turn into a humor/drama with hints of tragety

  6. #8
    yayyyy, i like this story!!!

    ( you probably think i'm annoying now lol)

    -update soon ^^


  7. #10
    oh god...i agree...I like...Love this story soo far ^_^'


 

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