http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5013574/...y_Easter_bunny
I hope you all enjoy it! ^^

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5013574/...y_Easter_bunny
I hope you all enjoy it! ^^
Hm, well, overall, I liked it. It was a bit fast paced for me, but then again, it is a one-shot right? The typing errors were a bit of a pain-as in hard to ignore, but I've been accused of not using spell check, so, who am I to say anything, right? Ha ha. Like I said, I really liked it. There was something about it that was just... really nice. I don't know, maybe it's because I haven't read a sasunaru in a while, ha ha. You've got potential, though, to get really good. Keep at it.
Ah, this is my first review in a long time, so I hope it was constructive and helpful and made you feel good and what not.
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YAYi like it
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Last edited by debflash; 04-11-2010 at 01:57 PM.
i love this story