Give me back my Easter bunny! +18

[KonohaUzumaki]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5013574/...y_Easter_bunny


I hope you all enjoy it! ^^

[SonadowX]

Hm, well, overall, I liked it. It was a bit fast paced for me, but then again, it is a one-shot right? The typing errors were a bit of a pain-as in hard to ignore, but I've been accused of not using spell check, so, who am I to say anything, right? Ha ha. Like I said, I really liked it. There was something about it that was just... really nice. I don't know, maybe it's because I haven't read a sasunaru in a while, ha ha. You've got potential, though, to get really good. Keep at it.

Ah, this is my first review in a long time, so I hope it was constructive and helpful and made you feel good and what not.

[xomgmilkx]

Loved it!

[debflash]

YAY i like it

[lovelycat]

i love this story