sasunaru

[shyladay12x]

Ok sorry if i have any mistakes. Tell me about them in you're commets. And I know its not the best so tell me how you fell about it and give me some pointers. Thx i would appreciate it! But dont be too mean about what you have to say. Cause i night just make a knew one and want to know some peoples percpective on my new one. Thats it Enjoy!

It was a summer nigth. Naruto and sasuke where about to have another one of they're 'training' fights again.
"Hey Naruto!" Yelled sasuke.
"What?!" Naruto yelled back.
"Lets Make this alittle more interresting!"Sasuke said pulling out some of his kunia.
Naruto had a puzzled look on his face. He thought about it for a minute. Then he finally said : how can we make this more interesting?'
Sasuke had a smerk on his face "If I when i get to do whatever i want to you"
Naruto surprised at what was just said exepted his conditions.
"No take backs" Sasuke said.
"Hey! What happens if I when!?!?!"
"Nothing.....Because your not going to when."
"Not fair!" Naruto pouted.
A Few Minutes Later!

"Thats not fair Sasuke!" Once again naruto was pouting because he lost yet another fight againts Sasuke.
"It is to fair!"
"No its not!"
"YES IT IS, I WON FAIR AND SQUARE! SO SHUT UP AND COME ON!
At Sasuke's House

Sauke starts ripping of Naruto's clothes.
"S-Sasuke! What are you doing!?!?!" Naruto says, while sasuke's still tearing off his clothes.After Sasuke was done with naruto he started to take off his.
" S-Sasuke w-what are going to do?!?!?!"
"Im gonna do what I want to you. Rember the deal we had. If I win I the to do what I want with you."
"........"
Sasuke started to suck on Naruto's small cock compared to his.
"Does it fell good Naruto?"
"I-it f-f-fells g-good Sasuke."
Sauke looked up,Naruto was twiching,Sasuke saw that as i sign of pleasure, so he kept sucking until Naruto came.
"Looks like it felt good Naruto."
Then Sasuke stick his huge cock into Naruto's small opening. And started to thrust in and out.
"A-ah! That h-hurts Sasuke!"
Sasuke ignored him and keep thrusting in and out until he came inside of Naruto's poor body. Naruto started to cry because fo the pain.
"WHats wrong Naruto?"
"I-it hurts you baka!"
"Sorry Naruto."
Naruto with his weakness for Sasukes soft side gave hom a hug and wispered "Its ok Sauke.
Then Naruto and Sasuke had sex with each other untill the day came when sasuke left to join Orochimaru.
THE END Thx for reading!

[shyladay12x]

Sry u cant read it verry well my mistake

[Yuri_Lover]

awhhh it was cute =D
sasunaru rule xD

[ItaSasuNaruDei:)]

I really liked it but I thought it was a bit rushed?


still loved it

[Miyukiryu]

it was cute
but it was kinda fast
and probably not enough details

[xomgmilkx]

it was cute

[nekoriki64]

haha a little short and fast. but cute.