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View Poll Results: Should the story continue?

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  1. #1

    New Sensations


    Ok this is my first Fic on this site! so try not to eat me!
    I'd love you hear from you! et me know what you think and how it could be better!
    if the responce is good i'll probably right more!

    So enjoy!

    Youll be meeting
    Alex
    Haze
    Chip
    &
    Kain






    Alex hit the floor with a thud.
    “Owie…” he mumbled as he rubbed his head with his hair, Golden sandy locks falling slightly over his clear blue eyes. “Haircut time” he mumbled absently as he tried to untangle himself from the blanket as he rolled around on his floor.
    “ALEX! You’re going to be late!”
    “I’m up mom!” he yelled back. Alex stood up and stretched his 5’8 frame slender and lean. Today was a Wednesday…just great. School had been boring the past…well his whole life. At the age of 18 Alex was in his final year of school, and dyeing to finally get out. Alex was a straight A student and had never gotten a B- in his whole life, he had been given the choice on several occasions to skip grads but Alex didn’t like the idea of being around people who where even taller then the rest of the guys in his class. So he had stay behind and been bored.
    Alex slipped his clothing on and left the rest in a pile for the wash. He combed his hair and angrily brushed knots out. Brushing his teeth he washed up then jumped down the stair two by two. “Bye mom!” he yelled grabbing a piece of toast, his coat and his school bag, and shut the door before his mother had a chance to tell him to do something. Alex put his chin up “Ok! Today’s the day!” He stopped and blinked as a group of people walked by, He hung his head. “Or not” He said and decided that tomorrow he’d be brave and try to talk to someone on the way to school. “Tomorrow” he promised himself with a faint knowing it wasn’t going to happen.

    At the school gates Alex blushed slightly as he tried not to look at the prolonging of couples making out…and pushing the public limit. There was a reason you never walked the back ally of the school. And why teachers pretended not to notice what was going on. Alex sat down at his desk and sighed, closing his eyes and trying to block out the thought of having to live his life being shyer then a mouse near traps.

    “ALEX~!” Haze yelled jumping his best friend.
    Alex nearly fell out of his seat and wet his pants, blushing madly as the group of girls giggled. He chocked as Haze’s arms wrapped around his neck. “Sleep with me! I’m horny!” he announced loudly yearning a few shrieks from the females.
    Alex glared his cheeks bright red. “Not even in your perverted dreams!” he growled at his friend, “You have enough sluts” he mumbled.
    “Huh? Well that’s true…but you’re so cute!”
    “Get off of me you bisexual freak” Alex said trying to scramble out of Haze’s grasp.
    “Ouch…coming from a gay…”
    Alex blushed again and shook his head.
    “Oh right where still peaking out of the closet…sorry buddy the world already knows!”
    Alex flustered, “Anything with lips has teeth behind it…” He grumbled.
    “Oooh speaking from experience?”
    Alex felt ready to die at that point. “Why? Why couldn’t I have strangled in my sheets?” he asked himself.
    “Duh you’d die a virgin…that would suck” Haze said with a grin.
    “Haze lay off of him!” Chip muttered freeing Alex from Hazes grasped.
    “Thank you” Alex muttered in relief, looking up at his two friends. Both of them where completely different, Haze had beach boy hair and body, he was a player and partier and was on his was to being the CEO of a company. Chip was tall…and more tall, he liked sports but Alex wouldn’t call him a jock. He had dark brownish black hair.
    “Alex…look who just walked in!” Haze teased and Alex same as every day looked up, and blushed. Kain…he quickly averted his eyes and silently prayed again that somehow the man who had just walked in could somehow be gay.
    “Hey Kain!” Haze called, “Alex was wondering if you were free tomorrow night!” He yelled out. Chip held Alex’s shoulders to keep him from hitting the floor.
    Kain walked over and Alex couldn’t help but stare. Kain was…yummy. He was poster boy, model type of body, that Alex was sure would he strong and solid and comforting if he could just into those arms. Pure black hair and coal eyes that where flecked with beautiful golden stars. He came back to earth as he remembered why Kain was walking over.
    “Well what ya say?” Haze asked nudging Kain in the ribs.
    “Sure…can I pick you up at 8?” Kain asked Alex, who only sat there and finally nodded when he was pinched in the back of the neck by Chip.
    “Great…see you at 8” Kain said with a smile and walked back to his desk.
    “Way to go Alex!” Haze said with a grin slapping him on the back…but Alex’s head was to far in the clouds to even feel it, Or notice the rest of the day go by.

    Alex rolled over in his bed, and sighed seeing the sleeping frame of his boyfriend, Kain. They had been dating for around a month and a half now, but it wasn’t what it looked like at all…Alex sighed he hadn’t been able to do it again…They hadn’t really had sex yet. Favors they had done, but were far as screwing, Alex had chickened out of his lover’s touch every time they had gotten close.
    “Hey sexy” Kain muttered from the pillow looking at Alex.
    “Morning”
    Kain pulled Alex down and nuzzled into him. “Kain we're going to be late” he mumbled
    “Nope…I’m up” he said sitting up and pulling Alex into his arms, tilting Alex’s chin and kissing him, Alex, like always, melted into Kain’s arms their bodies fitting perfectly together. “There, that’s a better wake up call” he said with a grin.
    Alex glared at Kain, “You take advantage of me” he grumbled.
    “Yes and you love it” Kain laughed.

    Alex grumbled through his classes, since in the morning he didn’t have any classes with Kain, but finally lunch arrived. Alex was about to stand in line for lunch as Kain walked by and grabbed his wrist dragging him behind him. “Wha? Where are we going?” He said his question was answered as Kain pulled him into the bathroom check the stall and locked the door. “Uhh are you going to mug me?” he asked pressing himself to the wall.
    “No” Kain said turning and looking at Alex, he wrapped him in his arms and kissed him passionately. “I hate mornings…I missed you” he said nibbling behind Alex’s ear.
    “K-Kain! We're in school!” Alex exclaimed but moaned in pleasure anyway.
    “Uh huh” Kain said not listening. As he slipped his hand down the frail boy's body.
    “Kain-ahh” Alex moaned softly as Kain rub the hardening bulge in Alex’s pants. He tilted his head away from his lover to him more room. Kain smirked Alex’s reaction, knowing the boy was way to far gone to even thinking of stopping or to even think where he even was. He let the boy's pants fall to the floor, and finally freed him from his boxers. Feeling the boy quiver in anticipation.
    Alex groaned his breath coming in small gasps and he shivered from the cold tile in his bare skin. “More” he begged griping the wall to keep him upright. Kain slowly fell to his knees, taking his lovers hard member in hand, and licking it lovingly. Kain swirled his tongue around Alex’s tip causing the smaller male to utter a cry of pleasure. He took the boy’s hard cock in his mouth and began to move in a steady pace.
    “Kain…please…more.” Alex gasped his whole body felt hot with the coming sensation (no pun intended). Kain picked his pace up rewarding his lovers for his pleas. “Kain…I’m gonna…” Alex said tossing his head back as he bit back a cry, as he came.
    Kain swallowed and watched his lover sink to his knees in pleasure. “Bastard” Alex muttered. Kain grinned and kissed Alex hotly pulling back when he felt Alex struggle for air. “I’m going to get you back.” Alex threatened.
    “Good I look forward to it…now hurry up, the bells going to ring love.” Kain said with a grin and got up looking down at Alex with a slight smirk to see him blushing after realizing what he had threatened to do and busily did his pants up. “See you in class.” Kain teased and slipped out of the washroom as Alex rearranged himself in front of the mirror.

    “Hey Alex…where were yo-?” Haze cut off seeing the ruffled up looking Alex, and then Kain who looked…amused. Haze opened his mouth to talk only to have a bun shoved in his mouth, He glared at Chip, who was munching on a hamburger without a bun, and shaking his head. “Not a good idea” Chip said.
    By the middle of the next class Kain and Alex where talking again, and at the end of class they where back to normally.
    “How do they do that?” Haze asked appalled, “All my fights end with me getting ----- slapped and kicked out of bed at 1am.” he said rubbing his cheek in memory.

    Alex sighed at the mountain load of homework he had for the weekend. “I’m taking a shower.” Alex said hoping the water would wash away his stress. Turning the shower on and the hot water to full he sighed and looked at himself in the mirror. “Meh…I look like hell.” He said and sighed again, striping himself of his shirt and blankly ignoring the small still visible red marks over his skin. “Meh.” he said again letting his pants fall to the floor. He stood naked in front to the mirror and couldn’t help but remember Kain mouth had sucked from him, Alex shook his head, “De-stress not get horny.” he thought grimly and stepped into the hot stream of water adjusting the temperature. Putting his head under the stream of water he was allowed into a world of silence. As he pulled out of the silence he gasped slightly for breath, and stopped as he heard the sound of clothing hitting the floor. Alex didn’t move as he heard the curtain draw back or the sound of someone stepping into the shower behind him.
    “I won’t hurt you.” Kain said softly, and pressed his naked body to Alex’s. Alex felt his breath catch in his throat as he felt Kain’s erection touching the small of his back. “Alex.” Kain moaned softly. Alex turned in his lover’s arms, and blinked in surprise to see how close Kain really was. Alex blushed, a shiver running up his spine.
    “Ka-!” Alex was cut off by Kain kiss, moaning and shivering as he felt Kain’s hands run over his shoulders and down his sides. Alex felt himself starting to relax when he felt Kain’s hands slipping down the small of his back. Alex lost himself in a kiss after that, but was rudely pulled away from it when he felt something being pushed inside of him. Alex whimpered his lovers name and clung to his shoulder in desperate attempt to stay on his own two feet. “Relax love…It wont hurt in a minute” Kain said softly as he probed Alex. “Turn around love; it will be easier for you to stand” Kain whispered softly into the boy’s ear. Alex did as he was told. Kain placed his hands on Alex’s hips and gently thrusted into him. Alex cried out and felt tears touch the corners of his eyes, but didn’t tell his lover to stop. Kain groaned softly as he felt the hot friction of Alex’s tight muscles around his hard member and struggled to keep his pace slow and controlled for the virgin boy. Kain re-angled his hips, and Alex cried out in pleasure which only sent a rush to Kain as he picked up the pace. Bodies slamming against each other, and cries of pure pleasure and lust echoed off the bathroom walls. The water ran muffling the sound of the groans.
    “Please Kain! I can’t…god…” Alex cried out feeling his climax burning slowly in his stomach. “Kain!” Alex yelled as he came hard into his lovers hand. Kain cried out as Alex came feeling the boy tighten around him enough to make him see stars, he groaned and came hard inside of his lover, leaning on the wall as both of them slid to the ground.
    “Alex…god” Kain said panting the water already washing away the liquid traces of what they had been doing. Alex leaned into Kain gasping for breath.
    “Wow…” Was all he could say as his lips where trapped by Kain’s again.
    “God Alex, you were amazing” He said holding him close their naked bodies fitted together perfectly.
    “That was amazing” Alex whispered softly his voice held amazement.
    “I love you Alex” Kain said looking down at the spent blond. Alex could only blink back tears at hearing those words for the first time.
    “I love you too” He answered smiling in happiness, his heart brimming with joy as he cuddled into his lover’s arms.

  2. #2
    Dude, seriously,
    Continue!!

    or else...

  3. #3
    Wow, this was well-written. But I have to say, if you don't have a good plot for the sequel / continuation, it's better to not continue the story. There's been too many books and movies ruined by a terrible sequel; don't let your story be another one please.

  4. #4
    the best thing to do for a sequal is CHANGE CHARACTERS work on Haze's Love story, then Chip's. i think Haze's will be funny....with him getting kicked out all the time, maybe he falls into a slight depression, and he find's his "White Knight"....

  5. #5

    Talking

    omg u must make more i luved it! but i would say 4 u 2 do this u should bring in the others more 2 broden the story and tell us what their luv life is like, but its ur stort so its up 2 u what u do with it, after all u r a good wrighter.
    Last edited by sora-gemz; 08-12-2010 at 12:24 PM.


 

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