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  1. #1

    Misery Business

    Rated: T

    Disclaimer- I don't own Naruto

    A/N: Yayyy!!! my first fanfic ^_^.


    Part One.

    Misery Business


    Sakura P.O.V.


    Swoosh.I could hear the cool summer breeze rustling the leaves above. The suns intense heat hitting flush against my worn out body.

    We had been training all morning non-stop, trying to get stronger for future missions.

    Kakashi was sitting in a near by tree reading his favorite book. Naruto was sprawled on the lush green grass looking up at the sky trying to catch his breath for a moment, and Sasuke was leaning against a tree facing away from the group. I could see the lightest hint of pink on his cheeks, probably because of the heat.

    ?Well guys, that?s it for the day! See you all tomorrow, same time!? I could hear kakashi-sensei yell from across the field.

    ?Wha- What was that? He?s in more of hurry to leave then we are.?

    ?Hn.?

    He probably thinks I?m just some crazed fan girl?

    ?Hey, Sasuke??

    I am left staring at his retreating back. Letting my head hang, I walk away too.

    ? Sasuke?? He completely ignored me? I don?t get why, he never really talks to me?

    being left alone as a stupid fan girl sucks!


    "Sakura! Guess who I just saw!?!? Ino called walking up next to her.

    Hrm.?Ino-pig who cares!?? I say with a low growl.

    ?What?s your problem? I was going to tell you that I just saw Sasuke-kun, he was heading in that direction,? points to the bookstore ,?want to go see what he?s up too?? Ino suggested.

    Normally I would say ?yes? but knowing Sasuke would probably find me more annoying than I already am I?d rather pass. Rejecting the offer I left Ino clueless. I head home and turn on my computer once I get into my room. There was a website that was created by all the fan girls and fan boys of the Fire Country. Mostly all the talk was about the great Uchiha Sasuke and his ?smexiness.?

    I quickly scan up and down the page. till something catches my attention,

    ?Who do you like best??

    *click* -scrolls down-


    #1 fan girl- ?Sasuke because he?s so flippin hot!?

    ?I know isn?t he??

    Hmm, here?s another one from

    Instant_ramen- ?Naruto! He?s so funny!?

    Umm -scrolls down even more-

    Sasuke, Sasuke, Naruto, Sasuke, Kiba, Sasuke, Neji, Shikamaru, ?fuzzy brows??

    ^_^? that?s a new one

    Oh look, someone put,
    ?Haku because I have an interest in pretty boys.?

    Okay well I?ll put, ?Sasuke, because he never gives up.?

    Sasuke's P.O.V.

    ?Damn! What is it with me being stocked everywhere I go?!?! Don?t those stupid fan girls have lives they need to be getting back to before they die of stupidity??

    *sigh* -turns on computer-

    ?I hate wasting my time checking this stupid website but, I need to keep updated just in case those idiot fan girls plan on rape or kidnap.

    Ok here?s something new: ?Who Do you Like Best?

    Let?s see? Me because I?m so flippin hot.


    ?Aren?t I?? haha

    Naruto, because he?s so funny., Me because I?m the coolest., me, me, Naruto, me, Kiba, me, Neji, Shikamaru, ?Fuzzy Brows!??

    ?that?s a first.? Hmm someone put, ?Haku, because I have an interest in pretty boys.? that?s nice, and me because I never give up. ?some fan girl? wrote this. I wonder who she is?

    ?How do you know it?s a she?? A high scratchy voice popped out of nowhere.

    ?Wha-? Stupid Naruto! *sigh* Easy, it says ?girl? in some ?some fan girl? and can?t you knock!??

    ?Well I was going to but I decided to save you some time.? Said Naruto giving me a bright grin.

    ?Hn, idiot.? I gave him a annoyed look and rolled my eyes.

    ?Don?t call me that you -------! Whoa, look at all those girls trying to get a piece of you.?
    Naruto said with a cocky smirk.

    ?SHUT UP!?

    ?Lucky bee.? Naruto laughed seeing Sasuke getting all worked up.

    ?Naruto. Leave.? I give him a stern glare and point to the door.

    ?What?! That?s no way to treat a guest.? Naruto pouted.

    "Visitors are those whom I invite. You, however, I don?t recall ever inviting.? I bit out harshly, standing very close to the his face, daring him to do something.

    ?What?! You want to take this outside!??

    ?You want to take this outside??

    ?Let?s take this outside!?

    ?Okay then let?s go!?

    ?Sasuke. Naruto, Quiet down up there, I?m trying to read.?

    To be continued?

    A/N: This is my first Fan fiction and because its ?part 1? of the story its probably not as interesting. ^_^ Review please? ?I?ve got cookies!?
    Last edited by I'm the One; 01-02-2008 at 03:53 PM.

  2. #2
    This is a cute fic. ^^ Im addicted to another fic called 'Misery Business' its a really long story but I love it you should read it sometime. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3550345/1/Misery_Business

  3. #3
    kewl, i luv fanfiction ^_^
    i need to read that story
    (checking fic. right now..)
    lol i just called diz story "Misery Business" cuz i was listening to that song while typing it
    hehe...

    ... and that story's long! lol it seems pretty cool though. i've read this other one that was like 58 chapters longer. Its called 'Family Uchiha,' that story has the most yaoi of all yaoi stories i've 'ever' read. You should read it.
    Last edited by I'm the One; 09-20-2007 at 04:18 PM.

  4. #4
    cool i give it a 5 out of 5 hugles rateing


  5. #6
    Disclaimer- i don't own Naruto

    A/N:

    Part 2

    Misery Business



    ?Sasuke? Why is Kakahi here?? asked Naruto completely confused as to what their sensie was doing at Sasukes house.

    ?I don?t know. I?m still trying to figure out what you are doing here?!? Sasuke replied in an irritated voice.

    ?Tsk, Tsk. Sasuke, I came by to give you this,? sets down a small paper bag ?it?s a gift from the Hokage she said you need to loosen up a bit.? with that he left chuckling before anyone could reply.

    Naruto took a glance at Sasuke who seemed to have frozen, trying to make the contents in the bag explode. ?hm?? Naruto moved his gaze to the bag and then back at Sasuke before bursting out in giant fits laughter.

    ?Dobe!? Sasuke hissed hitting Naruto upside the head and turning his attention back to the computer screen.

    ?Oww! Sasuke you ------- what was that for?? Naruto asked nursing the lump that was forming on his head.

    ?For being an idiot. Now what do you want?? Sasuke asked a little irritated.

    ?Shesh, well if you must know I came to use your computer , so I can delete my myspace account.? Naruto grinned ?hehe he?s pmsing a lot now a days??

    ?Naruto why don?t you use yours?? Sasuke asked.

    ?Because, I felt like using yours. Duh.? Naruto replied giving one of his signature grins.

    ?Don?t lie Naruto you don?t need an excuse to come see me? Sasuke gave Naruto a sexy smirk.

    A small blush took over Naruto?s cheeks. ?NO! Don?t be so full of yourself -------. Seriously now can I use your computer, please.? Naruto begged.

    ?Wow! The Dobe is being serious.? Sasuke said in mock hurt.

    ?Sasuke-Teme, you?re so mean to me.? Naruto said pouting cutely.

    It was Sasuke?s turn to blush. ?Whatever. I was just messing with you, Dobe.? Sasuke said moving over to let Naruto sit on the chair.

    A/N: K. well, i hope you don't hate me if you thought this story was a waist of you're time but since you already read it, um ^^ maybe you can un-read it?

  6. #7
    thats a very intresting story...i think its cute...soo far ^_^'

  7. #8
    Quote Originally Posted by EmoUzumaki View Post
    thats a very intresting story...i think its cute...soo far ^_^'
    cool thanx

  8. #9
    A/N: Yeah ^_^' i never updated, i know. I decided to finish what i began so here's more to the story!!! unfortunately its to be continued but PLEASE REVIEW everyone! enjoy!!!
    Discalaimer: i don't own Naruto... >.> of i did, they'd be kissing in every episode

    Misery Business
    Part 3
    "Scootch over Sasuke!" said the blonde
    Thump!
    Sasuke was pushed off the chair and onto the floor. Sitting up he gave Naruto a growl and stood leaning on the comp. desk.
    "why do you want to delete your myspace anyway?" asked Sasuke rolling his eyes.
    "because i'm tired of it. And besides, i spend most of my time on youtube" said Naruto rubbing the back of his neck and putting his attention towards the computer.
    "Oh, i see, is it where everyone enjoys watching you make a fool out of yourself on the internet?" asked the raven.
    "Nooooooo, its for entertainment. i do it to make people laugh and to cheer them up when they feel all blue and crap" stated Naruto.
    "Riiiiight."
    Naruto pouted and tried to ignor the Uchiha.
    Click Click Click and "delete" said Naruto under his breath. Sasuke smirked and sat on his bed. The computer was right beside it, so he decided to give Naruto some space to hurry up and get the hell out.
    Naruto sighed and turned around on his seat to face the Uchiha. Sasuke stared straight back.
    "What?" said the raven lifting a fine eyebrow.
    "So what about... Sakura?"asked Naruto.
    "what about her?" asked Sasuke confused to the brought up, random subject. Naruto smiled and went to sit next to the Raven. "i don't know, you seem to have been igonoring her alot lately."
    "Naruto, i have very little interest with overly obsessed fangirls" stated the raven before going any deeper into the conversation. He realy despised fangirls. So far the poor raven has had no privacy thanks to those fangirls. He can't do anything with out being watched(/stalked). Not even in his own home!
    "I know but-" the said blond was cut off.
    "Dobe! is this going to go anywhere? or do you just have no good conversation to bring up?" asked Sasuke crossing his arms.
    "Yes, its very important actually so if YOU WOULD JUST LISTEN!!! that'd be great." said Naruto getting a bit angry for the interuption. The raven quieted down. "Sasuke, if you hadn't noticed Sakura has been feeling quiet depressed no thanks to you..."
    "you would know" interupted Sasuke
    Naruto stood and pushed the Uchiha to lay flat on the bed, Sasuke's feet still touching the ground. The blonde grabbed both of the raven's hands threatingly with the said boy under him. "Will you let me Talk!?" yelled the irratated blonde.
    "Moron, and if i don't?" aske Sasuke. He hmph'd and closed his eyes not giving the slightest unconfort with the close contact. "Your all talk and no action..."
    Naruto grinned, "or at least, That's what she said"
    "And what's the suppose to mean?!" growled Sasuke. Naruto got off of him and walked towards the door. "Nothing teme, i'll see ya later. I have to go." Sasuke hand signal'd him to leave.
    Naruto took a hault when he took a hold of the door knob.
    "Sasuke, let me just tell you something before i go. Not all fangirls are bad, some are really nice and some just want to be your friend. Sakura already knows you don't like her, but that doesn't mean u can't befriend her." and with that said. the blonde ran off and left shutting the door.

    Next day

    Sasuke is seen walking alone...
    In the Streets of konoha in front of the Ramen stand some girls call Sasuke-kun up there asking him to hang out with him. He didn’t want to but they said something about the food being their treat so he shrugged it off and went with them. They started chatting about nothing but at the same time ‘everything.’
    ….Sasuke said a few words now and then but not much.
    Ramen Stand:
    Melee: So sasu-kun, heard you and naru-chan where going out…
    *Chokes on noodles* Sasuke: wha-
    Maria: What are you talking about?! They’re not going out!
    Minie: Actually Melee’s right Maria-chan, I saw a video of Naruto-kun and Sasuke-kun making out!
    Sasuke: it was a dare I-
    Minie-Seeee?
    Maria-No Way!
    Sasuke:I-
    Melee: I saw that too. *looks at Sasuke-kun* It looked like you and Naruto were enjoying making out with each other in bed, hitting it off with some nice rock music and everything, neh?
    Sasuke: *blushes* *sweat drops* Well I-
    Minie- Hahaha, Josh told me he saw it. According to him this emo kid asked him to watch it. So he did and got jealous!
    Maria- Whoa whoa-whoa! Josh’s gay?!
    Minie- not gay! Just bi *wink* but I dunno if you have noticed. Maria, why are you so cluless with everything??
    Maria- I am n-
    Melee- Josh is a girl right?
    Minie- Yeah, she just likes to pretened she’s a guy on myspace ;] hahah.
    Maria- And I know this now!?!? Then what's her real name!!??
    Minie- *rollz eyes*
    Melee- Sasuke-kun, you and Naruto should go out!
    Sasuke- I don’t-
    Minie- Come on Sasuke! You and Naruto-chan look so cute together!!!
    Sasuke- That’s not gonna-
    Maria- Its true Sasuke-kun. You should go out. ^///^
    Sasuke- sigh Me and Naruto are ‘just friends’
    Melee: Well fine. But you should at least consider it.
    Sasuke- hn.

    Sasuke walked off and the girls whined about him staying a little longer but he left. Hanging out with these girls was already poisoning his mind.
    Sasuke made some “excuse” to why he was leaving and bid them goodbye. The girls nodded sadly in understanding and waved at him saying “See ya later Sasuke-kun!!!” as he began to walk away. Sasuke didn’t look nor wave back. He just continued walking.

    "And Naruto mentiond befriending these people." Sasuke smirked, "Well, they aren't that bad, but they are annoying," thought the raven.

    TO BE CNTINUED...

    A/N: YAYYY!!! thanx for reviewing!!! COOKIES for everyone!!!


 

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