Wish to Be Dead

[YaShuYuOi]

You make me feel pain
You make me bleed
You make me hear the ripping of flesh

Always switching your personality
Making me believe
Believe that for once you're good

I can't stand you
You make me wither
Wither like a rotting corpse

My eyes hurt from all this crying
Making them blood-shot red and puffy
You make me feel I'm insane, that I am the one whose possessed

I can't see a future awaiting me
I don't see the point of getting up every morning
I have wishes that will hopefully come true:

Let me feel the razor-sharp blade glide across my skin
Let me see a bullet drill and penetrate my body
Let me bleed gallons of blood so I can use it to bathe
Let me feel what it's like to get raped
Let me turn blue and purple to experience suffication

But most of all, I wish to be dead

[zexy]

I love the poem (if that doesnt seem so emo)

[Shyama101]

Oh mai~ i love the poem! It' sso...soo deep!! It made me cry like this monkey

[YaShuYuOi]

AAwwwwww!!!!! Thank you!!! Both of you!! You guys made my day lol haha :3

[yaoiheaven1208]

Love the poem. it's so deep and emotional. I can really feel the poem.. well I did.. hehe..

[krash]

its really nice.
i specially liked the last stanza and the last sentence, thats the part that really gets you. at least in my opinion.

[NanaLuv]

Wow,, really beautiful poem ^^
I love it ^^

[Re-L]

wow... this poem is so good! poor me i can't write any poems

[YaShuYuOi]

@Re-L: Lol I'm sure chu can :D. This poem I finished in, like, around 10-15 minutes :)

@Everybody who Replied: Haha chu guys are making smile like a dork :D! I love all y'alls comments and thank chu so much for even replying :)

[Death60Note60Kira60]

Wow thats kinda messed up.
Still good writing though.