Broken Down - Not Defeated

[Ryuu]

My heart aches,
My body yearns,
My lips crave,
My mind rejects.

Broken my heart,
Shattered my dreams,
Smothered my feelings,
but I stand not yet defeated.

My heart pounds,
My body squirms,
My lips part,
My mind defends.

Pained me deeply,
Shunned me repeatedly,
Showed me hatred,
but I stand not yet defeated.

My heart slows,
My body struggles,
My lips close,
My mind blocks.

Crushed me completely,
Driven me insane,
Beaten me blind..

... but I stand not yet defeated..

~ I have no idea where this came from, I just got bored? Anyway, feedback is appreciated ^^

[nejisaku]

I think it was really good.