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  1. Macho Saiyan Daughter
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    Mom, What're You Doing?

    WARNING: This is a really old story, written in July '09. I had to do some minor edits to it, due to a bunch of bad language. XD Contains incest, yuri, and possibly loli. (Videl x Pan) o.o This story can also be found on AdultFanfiction.net (link's in my sig~)

    Summary: Pan gets ill and her mother Videl takes care of her. But later on, she seems to take care of her the wrong way...

    Chapter 1: Sickness

    Achoo!

    Whew, damn, this is the 3rd time I've sneezed as I try to go to sleep! It's already 1 in the fu€king morning and it's dark, too, eek. I really hate in when I'm awakened too early, especially on a school
    day, it gets on my nerves. At least I have a nightlight, glowing in my room, and a teddy bear, a friend who would provide extra comfort in my sleep. And I think I'm sick; my throat feels scratchy, my face feels as if it's been in the oven for too long, I even have a runny nose, and I'm sneezing a lot too. I gotta tell Mom this (Dad's sleeping over at Grandpa Goku's house.), she'll know what to do.

    I get out of bed, creep into Mom's room, open the door, and see her sleeping body all spread out on the bed. Her room is pitch black, and she looks more comfortable by herself, rather than leaning against Dad's rock-hard back. So I tiptoe to her bed, hoping to not make any noise, not even a tap, so she won't wake up acting like a bit€h. I tap softly on her back; she doesn't respond. Then I shake her shoulder; she only makes a small moan. After that, I whisper to her softly: "Mom..."

    She moves to my direction, and hugs me - huh?! Now I'm stuck, but I don't give up. I try to escape her tight embrace, but no luck. "Mom!" I whisper loudly this time.

    Mom falls off the bed and - I don't mean to look at this, but... - I see her gown all wrinkled, as her ghost-colored panties are showing. Wait...she's not wearing a gown, but she's wearing one of Dad's shirts that he wears at work. Mom then wakes up and whispers sleepily: "Yes, Pan?"

    "Okaasan, I'm sick,and I can't sleep. Can you help me with that? Oh yeah, sorry if I scared ya." I say to her. Mom gets up, itches her eye, and walks me to the kitchen, where her medicine supplies are. "Here ya go." She just hands the medicine to me - dumbass. "No, dumbass, get a spoon and put the medicine in my mouth, I'm too clumsy to do it myself!" I begin to sound irritated and aggravated; Mom is such a dumbass when she is sleepy, and I really hate that.

    She gives me the medicine, which is now poured in a spoon, I take it, and we both go back to bed. And I had no trouble sleeping at all!

    *

    I wake back up on a sunny day at 8:15AM. I know Mom is awake; I hear her footsteps, walking here and there. I get up and try to get away from the sunlight, but instead, I begin to lose concentration of my sight, and I collapse on the ground.

    Mom hears the thump I made when I fainted, and I hear her footsteps running to my room. She enters, and I think I am being carried back to my bed. When I'm placed on my bed, I whisper: "W-What happened, Okaasan?" Good thing I'm not injured, or otherwise, I'd feel worse than what I am right now; my head is aching, my face is in the oven again, and I feel dizzy, must've been why I fell. As Mom strokes on my hair, she says concernly: "Pan, you just fell, it's gonna be alright. You still have that fever, just like last night, but the other things you have are gone now. I'll take your temperature, when I get back from the kitchen." Mom then runs out of my room to grab a thermometer, and I am really happy that Mom is a protective woman when I am in some trouble, even when Dad isn't around.

    *

    Minutes pass, and she is back with a thermometer. She puts the object in my mouth and sees the temperature: 102 degrees. That's very high. "Pan, you're very sick. You need plenty of rest, while I take care of you. It will be hard for me to do this, since your father is gone." she says. Duh, at 102 fu€king degrees, she would HAVE to fuckin' take care of me, 'cause I'm dying here, whew! I don't wanna die from a fever nor hypothermia! I feel my forehead: ssssss! Shit, my head is burning badly from being in that damn oven for so long! I refuse to feel my forehead any longer - I don't want my hand to be stuck in the oven too!

    To be continued.....

    Hope u like! ^_^


    My writing was so good back then...T^T

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    Chapter 2: Disgust

    Plz keep in mind that this is an old story. ^^;

    I wake up in my mother's arms and I discover that I had fallen asleep when Mom was taking my temperature. At first, when I am starting to open my eyes, I see Mom's head, covered with her beautiful black hair, laying on my chest, but when I widen my eyes to see more clearly, I stare in horror at Mom, who is in her panties and bra. Now why is she on top of me dressed like that? I don't want to know, so as my heart starts racing and my face burns with fever and embarrassment at the erotic sight of my mother, I make an attempt to get out of my bed and escape from my sick-minded mother, but it is unsuccessful. "Where are you going, Panny-baby?" I hear Mom moan out. What's up with her?

    "Are you leaving your own darling mother here? Alone? I hope not, or there'll be consequences for you, madam, if you know what I mean, tee-hee." she chuckles in a somewhat sexy tone, which makes me suspicious, so I lie: "I'm j-just heading to the bathroom, I don't wanna wet myself, do I?" Then, I run out of the bedroom, head to the bathroom, and lock the door. It's very quiet here, so quiet, that I can feel my heart beating violently at my ribcage. As I sit right in front of the door, a trail of thoughts run through my head:

    Mom, what's up with you? I am your daughter for Christ's sake, what's gotten into ya, crack?! Mom, what're you doing? Please tell me, I think you just miss Dad, and you're eager to have him back! He's just hanging out with Grandpa, Grandma, and Uncle Goten, it won't kill him. Please stop this, O-kaasan, you're scaring me already!

    After the thoughts are spilled out of my skull, I sit in the bathtub, hoping that my mother controls herself, by the time I get out of this bathroom. Then, an idea pops in my head, and I head for the front door. I want to feel the cool, fresh air on my face, but my plan is ruined. "Pan, go to your room right now!" Hmph, Mom seems like her usual self, so I follow her orders, hoping that she is normal again. I enter my room, but unfortunetly, Mom's naked body is lying on my bed, and her legs are opened, exposing her pussy. Her breasts are perked up in joy, as her nipples start to harden, and her arms are behind her head. I look into her sick face, smirking at me, like a sick, perverted wh0re. "C'mon Panny-baby, y'know you wanna touch it." she says, stroking her leaking pussy with her finger. "No!" I blurt out, and I grab the doorknob -

    Dammit! It's locked! That bit€h locked it!

    "You're stuck with me. If you don't fu€k me, then you'll be grounded."

    "Fu€k you, bit€h! There! I did it!" I flip my mother off, as I make that sudden outburst. Then, I feel something hard being thrown on my head - probably Mom's fist - which causes me to tumble down to the floor sideways.

    *

    "Pan...Pan..." she moans, as I am stuck in darkness. Why won't my damn eyes open?! I feel kinda queasy - I feel something wet and soft on my nipple...what is it? I force my eyes to open:

    A red tongue is licking my nipple. It's coming from...

    "MOM!"

    "What?"

    "MOM, WHAT THE FU€K ARE YOU DOING?! AM I NAKED? SHIT!!" A lump is forming in my throat, as Mom's finger starts digging in my pussy. It hurts so much, my own mother, Videl, is raping me, and I'm only 14 years old. I feel as if my world is being torn down into a million pieces.

    "Don't worry, sweetie, everything's gonna be just fine. Wait and see."

    "Mom, stop it! This is wrong, this shit is wrong! You shouldn't do this to your own daughter! Please stop, Mom, please! What if Dad sees us like this?!" Tears fall down from my eyes, as I push Mom away from me. When my shoving sends Mom off my bed onto the floor, she jumps back on the bed, and humps on me, as if I were her little pony she enjoys riding.

    Then when Mom is kissing and licking my hot neck, I bite her arm really hard, like a vampire biting her victim's neck, so fu€king hard, that I leave a bite mark oozing with blood. "You wh0re! I'm your daughter who happens to be ILL! If you keep this up, and refuse to take care of me, I will die!" I whisper evilly in my mother's ear, as Mom flinches at the bite and examines her bloody arm. As she does this, I tell her some sort of speech: "My temp. was 102 degrees, right? So that means I have fever! Imagine that the weather outside is 102 degrees. How would that make you feel? Burned? Hot? No, you're not hot at all! You're a slut who loves to torture me, even if this is the first time you've done this to me! You won't fu€king stop! You have a husband for fu€king crying out loud! Now, why're you doing this to me?!"

    "I'm lonely." It makes me wanna cry when she says this, she sounds so sad and hurt. "I'm really sorry I'm doing this, I really am...." Tears well up in Mom's eyes as well, and we both hug each other for so long that we forget the fact that we're both naked.

    Suddenly, I hear a knock on the door.

    END



    Okay, now I'm done. *gets nasty thoughts of parent/offspring incest out of her head*
    It's not that I hate incest, it's just that I'm more into homosexual incest. But only w/ siblings though, parent/offspring makes me SICK. I don't even know WHY I typed this. No offense.
    Well, shit, it took me all night to do this, so ---- it, I'm done! (OH YEAH, PLZ REVIEW!) *goes to sleep*


    Well, that's it. Sorry it's so short tho. Plz review~ (I don't think I've improved over the years, it seems I've only gotten worse. ^^; )

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    :3 i loved it! there are some parts in it where you were yourself and i liked it ...especially the ---- you ----- part lol
    nice work bardie, you get a cookie ;D*gives you cookie*

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    Bardie (07-19-2010)

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    Icest... *drool* I wish you could've continued!

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    Bardie (07-20-2010)

  7. Macho Saiyan Daughter
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    Quote Originally Posted by KrissyKunn View Post
    Icest... *drool* I wish you could've continued!
    I wish I could...if only I was good at writing again

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    *puts helmet on you* I'll do it for you D: LOL xD

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    I LOVE IT!!! That was HOT!!!
    Only bad thing was that I started to think my own goth mother... XD
    I can`t never write like you have...

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    that was so hot! u r a good writer! wellll.......

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    DAMN YOU BARDIE!

    How dare you end a yuri fiction without sex?! Here I was reading it and just hoped to read some ero incest yuri, and no sex at all! Continue or make another fiction with ero so I wont get mad!

    lol, joke. You're a better writer than I am and you should really continue with these yuri fictions.

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  15. Macho Saiyan Daughter
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kandie View Post
    DAMN YOU BARDIE!

    How dare you end a yuri fiction without sex?! Here I was reading it and just hoped to read some ero incest yuri, and no sex at all! Continue or make another fiction with ero so I wont get mad!

    lol, joke. You're a better writer than I am and you should really continue with these yuri fictions.
    LMAO, u literally scared me at first w/ the first part~ xD
    Well, I wish I could continue the yuri fics, if only I can think of another story...^^;


 

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