My Gravitation fan fic

[kiakia0131]

Ok This is kinda long so I am going to post a little bit at a time. I'm still deciding if it is going to continue or not.
(BTW this is not what is seems like...it is not bad)

"Owww that hurts" yelled Shuichi Shindo to his partner Eiri Yuki.
"Hold still" said Eiri Yuki.
"You're pulling too hard! Can't you be a bit gentler?"
"Close your eyes and grit your teeth Shuichi and It'll be over in just a second. I promise"

Shuichi gritted his teeth. Yuki pulled.
"Ow. Ow. Ow.!" Shuichi burst into tears.
"Shut up you" snapped Yuki. To most it would seem Eiri was being cold towards Shuichi, but Shuichi knew he was being calm, gentle even caring and not to mention sexy.

"Ok. I'm going to count to three and then I promise it will be out of you" said Yuki.
"One. Two. Three!" said Yuki. The older man tugged hard.
"There that wasn't so bad was it?" asked Yuki.

"No" sniffled Shuichi.
"Geeze" said Yuki. "I've never seen anyone make such a fuss over getting a splinter removed from their foot as you do."


Ok that's all I am posting for now. I hope you liked it because I really want to post more. See I told you it wasn't what you would probably think.

[yaoiboix]

haha i liek the setup for it, write more

[Yaoi-Chan]

Oh Thats Naughty

[kiakia0131]

I showed it to my friends at school and they were like WTF???? until they read the part about the splinter in the foot.

[Arin Maa]

thats cool!keep writing!

[kiakia0131]

OK I really want to post more of my fanfic....but.....I can't find the paper I had it written on so I can't post any more until I find the paper. I'll look for it after the Holidays.