When December Comes

[Arin Maa]

Hey!this is a Sasunaru fic ive been doing!im gonna put a little part in here and see what you say about it!so reply please!so that i know if should continue or not!i dont know how to rate this!its yaoi!it may have a little of hard yaoi ater on but i still dont know!!not in this chapter though!^^
i dont own Naruto characters!!

Chapter one

Sasuke opened his eyes. He could hear the rain pouring outside and against the window. It was December and had been raining for a few days now. He looked at the room. It was an hospital room, well-illumnated. There was a bed where a blonde boy seemed to sleep.

"Ive fallen asleep again" - Sasuke leaned to the bed, giving the blondie a kiss on his forehead.

Sasuke approached the window. Naruto was in a comma since August. They had gane together on a dangerous mission in the Village of Sound and fought against 4 ninjas. They were pretty strong but still were in disadvantage.
For five months Sasuke had been with Naruto while he "slept". He never left the room except to go home, shower or eat. Neverthless he was getting thinner and wicker. He missed Naruto smile and those blue-sky eyes.
Someone knocked at the door and a re-haired guy came in. First he looked at the bed and then at Sasuke.

"I though you'd still be here. Is he better?"

"The same. Thanks for coming, Gaara." - Sasuke shacked his han. Gaara was a nice guy now. He was trying tomake it up for everyone he had hurt. - "I'll be out for just some minutes. I need a shower and something to eat."

"Don't worry...and...Sasuke...he's going to get better..."

Sasuke turned to him and smiled litelly.
He went home and showered, missing the long baths he once had with his blonde fox. He could almost feel Naruto s fingers on his skin. A shiver went his spine with this thought. Sasuke was eating when he heard someone at the door. He stood up and opened it. Lee stood outside trying to catch up his breath.

"Naruto...something happened..." - the words that Sasuke most feared where now unlocked.

Sasuke runned faster than ever. What would he do if Naruto…died…he couldn’t even think about it!no!his love wouldn’t give up so easily!he was a warrior!it was his way of the ninja as he used to shout.
When he get to the hospital room there were doctors around Naruto but he could still hear the beep from the machine that was next to Naruto indicating that he hadn’t lost his love.

hope you like it!please coment!

[I'm the One]

Keep writting I think this stories cute ^_^
lol. idunno, i like how its written.

Continue with the story... maybe make it a little more detailed from when Lee showed up?
^_^ like for example sasuke taking a shower, walking down stairs to get something to eat
and than BAM!
the thing about lee and news about naruto.

*thumbs up*

[Kyoko-san*]

That was great! Keep writing. ^o^

[wander]

Omg! its awesome!! u better keep writting it....soo cute and sad >3<

[kibaluvu!]

it great!

but there are a few spelling things you need to work on!

keep writing!!

[nayaiiri]

awww naruto!! please keep writing i want o know about their relationship!!

[mitsuki hitsugara]

oh my god! wats supposed to happen?! please finish the story!

[KKS]

It's a good story. I like it. ^^
Just pointing out the errors I picked up, - Sasuke shacked his han. Shacked should be shook and hand is missing the d.
Sasuke runned faster than ever. runned should be ran. Oh and when Gaara shows up, the red in red-haired is missing the d.
I think it was a little rushed at the end and you could add a little more detail.
But it's a cute story and I can't wait to see the next chapter!